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falling in love doesn't hurt
it's where you land that does
on a bed of love
or into a hell of hate
perhaps neither,
just a friend
which can hurt the most
maybe falling in love does hurt
more than many may think
when your hopes are set high
and reality doesn't check in
then, all of a sudden
it slaps you square in the face
and you're left there standing,
wondering what hit you
curious as to what happened
waiting in the rain
for your ride to come
and there's nothing
except for the hollow pounding
or the lonely rain
whoever said falling in love doesn't hurt?
©2004-2009 ~chaosofthesanity
:iconchaosofthesanity:

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:icondreamgoddess:
Oh it hurts. Sometimes so much you think you'll never love again. But it's all apart of growing...emotionally. Falling for a friends is the worst though because you're always around them and it's always RIGHT there in your face for you to see. Sometimes it's better to love a stranger from a distance. Nice poem.
:iconchaosofthesanity:
thanks, yea, and it hurts more when like they're one of your closest friends.

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